Talk:WKVB (FM)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 11:41, 13 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 11:41, 13 May 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The "short description" should be above everything else per WP:ORDER.
 * I would put WAAF (and maybe K-Love) in bold since they're other names for the station.

History

 * Serial commas after "marketing, promotion", Van Halen, WRKO, and "Joe Calgaro, Mistress Carrie".
 * Commas after "November 26, 1988", "November 17, 1997", and "August 12, 2009" per WP:DATECOMMA.
 * Some block quotes are missing sources.
 * "and son Lee Zapis" "and his son Lee Zapis"
 * Remove the comma after "core artists".
 * "Mittman in particular praised" "Mittman, in particular, praised"
 * The last sentence in #Alternative_and_"raunchy"_lean needs a source.
 * For both uses, "cancelled" "canceled" (American English for American station).
 * Should "compliant" be "complaint"? They mean very different things.
 * "hosted on an" "hosted an"
 * The first paragraph in #Signal_adjustments needs more sources.
 * "cancelling" "canceling" (see above)

Current programming

 * No issues here.

Progress

 * Thanks, . I've tackled the vast majority of the issues raised with the sole exception of the last sentence in "Alternative and raunchy lean", a rare example of the type of connective sentence bridging sections together that has no citations of its own (it's a sentence backed up by the entire next section, essentially, and it's needed to provide the logical link). Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 21:14, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Fair enough; passing the article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:46, 17 May 2021 (UTC)