Talk:WLTZ/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 20:01, 15 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi again, Sammi! I will be reviewing this shortly.  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 20:01, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
 * You can call me Sammi (Brie is basically my last name). Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 20:04, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Apologies!  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 20:22, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the fast response and nice work on the changes! I am now happy to pass this article for GA status. Congrats!  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 21:36, 15 January 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check
Earwig says good to go. Quotations used—rarely—are in-line with WP:COPYQUOTE and only very short extracts.

Files
All images relevant and free:
 * : good, valid non-free rationale;
 * : good, valid public domain rationale;
 * : good, CC-BY-SA 3.0, uploaded to Commons by registered user.

Prose

 * I doubt the first ref in the lead is necessary, given its cited elsewhere and the lead has no other citations.
 * "section of East Columbus (postal address is actually Buena Vista Road in Columbus)" – maybe convert this into an efn note?
 * "three groups applied for television stations in Columbus," – wikilink Columbus as first mention in the body; likewise:
 * First mentions of ABC and NBC should also be wikilinked.
 * The sentence starting "WYEA-TV would prove to be a challenge as the group's first property," reads a bit too long for me. Perhaps it is possible to add a full stop somewhere?
 * "However, many of these changes were later trimmed back for economic reasons by Lewis." – is economic reasons the right word? Also:
 * Lewis is only first mentioned later in the article.
 * "By the start of 1981, American Family owned six stations, WYEA-TV and five outlets in larger markets" – recommend replacing the last comma with an em dash for better flow.
 * "beginning to brand as "Z-38"," – recommend "beginning to brand itself as "Z-38",".
 * "the station briefly had the first Black anchor on Columbus television," do the sources have a date for when this was? Seems noteworthy if possible.
 * "anchor Suzanne Hudson said the news was "like taking a knife to our throat" and left her "absolutely floored"." – is this relevant? It reads a bit too much like a news article quoting a miscellaneous anchor.
 * "In 2012, the station restored local news production from Columbus." – pretty short, I would merge this into the above paragraph.


 * All above ✅ done. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 20:53, 15 January 2023 (UTC)

Refs
All sources are RS. Passes spotcheck. No concerns with refs 1, 5, 12, 22, 30 or 39.


 * Ref 39 is missing a date.
 * Ref 41: I believe "wltz.com" should be "WLTZ"?


 * All above ✅ done. Date added for 39 which is now 41 as I added two references. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 20:53, 15 January 2023 (UTC)

Other
Infobox, navs, cats and other templates all good.
 * Recommend adding template:Use X English.
 * Could "alt=Refer to caption" be improved? Even just saying "a skyscraper with blue letters "Aflac", the l obstructed by a duck, at its top left" etc. should work.


 * All above ✅ done. Date added for 39 which is now 41 as I added two references. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 20:53, 15 January 2023 (UTC)