Talk:WNUV/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 05:15, 8 August 2023 (UTC)

Might review this within one week IDK.  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 05:15, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Nice work on the changes! Pass.  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 22:36, 13 August 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check
Earwig is happy.

File(s)
Both files are relevant and copyright-free.

Prose

 * In the lead, remove "(SSA)" as it is never used again.
 * In the first sentence of § Early years: Super TV, wikilink Baltimore.
 * In the second sentence, is said company really that unimportant that it not be named?
 * Is it possible to mention when (if known) Peter and John Fellowship announced their bid, for consistency.
 * I would wikilink newsmagazine (IDK if I am dumb but I have never heard of that term until now).
 * Wikilink cable TV.
 * "general-entertainment independent" – wikilink independent to independent station.
 * I know the second point is informatively sufficient but "economic factors" itself is a bit vague IMO.
 * Just curious, why does it say Salditch was "preparing for life" instead of something like preparing for the future of WNUV?
 * Wikilink NBC.
 * For one sentence there are a lot of commas. How about "The FCC approved of their purchase by way of ABRY Communications in March 1989, and" to improve the flow?
 * "antennas as an STV station" – recommend wikilinking and writing out satellite television.
 * That's S for subscription and it's introduced earlier
 * I know this is hardly relevant but is it possible to provide a short, few word explanation on why WBAL-TV declined to carry the show?
 * I don't think that'd be relevant to this article.
 * Wikilink Milwaukee.
 * "attempt to put up roadblocks" – recommend "set up" for improved formality (I am a pedant).
 * "low-power UHF station" – also write out and wikilink ultra high frequency with the abbreviation in parentheses.
 * On what grounds did UPN contest?
 * "became a front page issue" is informal – recommend rephrasing.
 * "was late to sign an agreement with The CW" – hmm, how about "with the network" or "with it" etc. since The CW was just mentioned?
 * "to start airing digital simulcasts" – I would wikilink simulcast.
 * Wikilink OFDM.
 * Wikilink ultra-HD.

Other items linked or revised. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:09, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

Refs
Passes spotcheck on refs 1, 6, 19, 25, 38, 42 and 64.

Others

 * Recommend template:use American English (optional)