Talk:WUXP-TV/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Bruxton (talk · contribs) 23:24, 1 February 2024 (UTC)

Review
I am happy to review this one. I will make comments atop the chart with questions or checked sections. Excited to work with you to get this article passed.

Spelling etc.

 * In History/The TVX Years should be "station's" for this sentence "The Taft stations purchase left TVX highly".
 * MT Communications ownership section "it was in second-place to WZTV among" probably should not be hyphenated.
 * These two should be fixed. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 02:23, 2 February 2024 (UTC)

Lead summary

 * The facts presented in the lead are repeated and cited in the article with one exception.
 * This appears in the lead but is not repeated and cited in the body it is also sister to Dabl affiliate WNAB (channel 58).
 * Reworded the lead to avoid this requiring excessive body detail about WNAB. As a "shelled" station (its programming was basically scooped up and ghosted for ownership-related reasons), it's hard to describe it in the lead without too many references. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 02:23, 2 February 2024 (UTC)

Images

 * The article does not have images. There is a logo which appears to be correctly licensed

Stable

 * Only 22 edits since February 2023 so the article is stable. No warring.

Wording that may need attention

 * Lead says "tight market" is that colloquial?
 * TVX years says "stocked" and "in the running" might both be colloquial
 * TVX years, "had been chosen, as had a tower site" maybe use "selected"?
 * TVX years "The station affiliated that fall with the new Fox network" should is be "became" affiliated.
 * MT Communications ownership, "However, that deal fell apart, and the deal went the other way" the sentence may not be clear and uses colloquial language
 * Fixed all. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 06:57, 3 February 2024 (UTC)