Talk:Wait a Minute (The Pussycat Dolls song)/GA2

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:49, 13 February 2022 (UTC)

I will start this today --K. Peake 07:49, 13 February 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Per the liner notes, Timbaland should be credited in his real name under songwriters


 * the Pussycat Dolls → The Pussycat Dolls under singles chronology, as "the" needs capitalization when beginning this parameter


 * "The song features" → "The song features a guest appearance from"


 * "who produced the song and co-wrote the song with" → "who served as the sole producer and co-wrote it with"


 * The release sentence should be the third of the para instead


 * ""Wait a Minute" was released, as" → "The song was released as" but start this sentence with the date because the second begins with "the song"
 * The sentence is not starting with the term on, also you have not changed to the song. --K. Peake 17:37, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
 * The sentence is not starting with the term on, also you have not changed to the song. --K. Peake 17:37, 15 February 2022 (UTC)


 * Write generally positive instead because one review was not so glowing


 * "Compared to the album's previous singles, the song" → "Compared to the Pussycat Dolls' previous singles, "Wait a Minute""


 * Too much commercial info is after the first sentence in the lead; only keep the United States part onwards


 * "on the Billboard Hot 100. It achieved its highest positions" → "on the Billboard Hot 100, while achieving its highest positions"


 * "where it peaked atop the country's" → "peaking atop the latter country's"


 * Introduce as the accompanying music video instead to be more specific


 * Add a part about the video synopsis


 * "It was performed on" → "The song was performed on"

Background and composition

 * Remove introduction to who the Pussycat Dolls are since that being in the lead is sufficient
 * The debut single part does not appear to be sourced
 * Remove comma before "Don't Cha"
 * "and stands as group's" → "and stands as the group's"
 * "Their collaboration resulted in" → "Timbaland and the group's collaboration resulted in"
 * "to be included in PCD," → "to be released on PCD,"
 * Remove "on the album" after included
 * Remove comma after lead singer
 * Pipe hip-hop to Hip hop music
 * Remove comma after described as; [9] needs to be invoked again here since it sources the range
 * Remove "as well" after the vocal production part since Hilson's previous contributions were mentioned a while back
 * Remove wikilink on Florida

Critical

 * "feeling it was" → "feeling it is"
 * "standout tracks of the album." → "standout tracks of PCD." to avoid overusage of the album
 * Sputnikmusic should not be italicised
 * Write the staff of Popjustice for that review since attributing it to the publication is misleading
 * "of a "[song] that had" → "of one "that had"
 * "opined "Wait a Minute" was a" → "opined "Wait a Minute" is a"

Commercial

 * "In their native country, "Wait a Minute" debuted on" → "In the Pussycat Dolls' native country of the United States, "Wait a Minute" entered"
 * "number 19 and 23 on Canada CHR/Top 40 and Mainstream Top 40 respectively." → "numbers 19 and 23 on the Canada CHR/Top 40 and Mainstream Top 40 charts, respectively." with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * "and 24 on the" → "and at number 24 on the"
 * "not to enter the top ten;" → "not to enter the top 10 on either chart;" per MOS:NUM
 * "New Zealand it became their" → "New Zealand, it became the group's"
 * "highest peak (number three)," → "highest peak of number three," but no positions are displayed by the broken URL
 * "and top 50 in" → "and reached the top 50 in"
 * "becoming the group's lowest charting single in" → "becoming the Pussycat Dolls' lowest charting single on"

Release and promotion

 * Shouldn't be the section before reception?
 * Per MOS:US, keep the United States here if the section is moved before reception and change to the US in that section, but if not then do it the other way round
 * "its accompanying music video was" → "an accompanying music video was" with the wikilink
 * "in Los Angeles, California with" → "in Los Angeles, California, with"
 * "performed fours songs including" → "performed fours songs, including"
 * Remove wikilink on "Don't Cha"
 * ""Stickwitu" and "Wait a Minute"." → ""Stickwitu", and "Wait a Minute"."
 * Mention what year the new year's eve special was, also this should be italicised per the article
 * "The group performed the song" → "The Pussycat Dolls performed the song"
 * Remove comma before the Doll Domination Tour and mention the crowd reaction per the source

Track listing

 * No track listing is displayed for the first CD single
 * The album version clean listed for the 12" vinyl is the one track not mentioned by the source

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Weekly charts

 * No peak performance is displayed by the Finland source

Year-end charts

 * Good

Certification

 * Good

Release history

 * Label → Label(s)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; this has largely improved since the first review!! --K. Peake 10:22, 13 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Hey *, just began editing; thanks for following up!! --MrHyacinth (talk) 03:19, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you, you have ran through things smoothly so far besides a few points that I copyedited and one that I mentioned is still a remaining issue. --K. Peake 17:37, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
 * ❌ since it has been a month and the nominator has not even started to work on the body of this article yet. --K. Peake 10:33, 10 March 2022 (UTC)