Talk:Wake Up Call (KSI song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)

Got a few GANs on hold but that is only because users haven't finished their responses yet, so I'll review this. --K. Peake 06:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "It is a pop-rap track. The song's lyrics" → "A pop-rap track, its lyrics"


 * "finally accepting KSI's success." → "finally accepting his success."


 * "and it reached" → "and it further reached"


 * "Netherlands and New Zealand." → "the Netherlands and New Zealand."


 * Remove wikilink on costume

Background

 * Why isn't this or a similar section at the start of the article's body?

Music and lyrics

 * Verse–chorus form and the length are both unsourced
 * ❌ you have still kept this --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)


 * There is information from 4 and 16 about the music and vocals that can easily be added here; take the chorus, synths and bass for example


 * "KSI continued," → "He continued,"

Release and promotion

 * "revealing the song's title as" → "revealing the title as"
 * ❌ you should implement the above version, not an altered one --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
 * ❌ you should implement the above version, not an altered one --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)


 * "debut studio album, Dissimulation (2020)." → "debut studio album Dissimulation (2020)."
 * remove the comma --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
 * remove the comma --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)


 * Wikilink YouTube


 * "using the hashtag" → "using the challenge's hashtag"


 * The replacement and verses info is not sourced; only the release and features are

Critical reception

 * Remove target on synth


 * Remove target on bass


 * Remove target on instrumentation


 * "Dominiq remarked that" → "He remarked that"


 * "this current generation."" → "this current generation"." per MOS:QUOTE

Music video

 * Wikilink music video


 * "by Nayip Ramos.[19] The music video was" → "by Nayip Ramos and was" since the two sentences are too short to be separate, plus [19] should solely be at the end of the sentence


 * "The music video was released" → "The video was released"
 * ❌ --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
 * ❌ --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)


 * "The video stars both artists and" → "The video stars KSI and Trippie Redd alongside"


 * Where is the dance troupe mentioned?
 * ❌ it is still there but unsourced


 * Remove wikilink on costumes


 * Remove target on behind-the-scenes footage
 * ❌ --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
 * ❌ --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)


 * "Speaking about the costumes" → "Discussing the costumes"


 * ""[It was] one" → ""[It was o]ne"

Commercial performance

 * "was the country's second-most" → "was the second-most"


 * The number of weeks it spent on the second chart is not mentioned, so just change to writing about the number seven debut


 * The Hungary and Netherlands positions are top 30, so should be mentioned in the prose


 * "In Australia, the song" → "Elsewhere, in Australia, the song" since that is a different continent


 * Is Billboard really needed in the title of the Canadian chart just because the magazine publishes it?

Live performance

 * Move the live performance to Release and promotion, as this is only one para

Credits and personnel

 * Songwriter should come before vocals in the credits order

Charts

 * Are you sure the Australia Hip Hop/R&B chart is notable?

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed, but a problem I noticed that is common with your articles is that you did not expand the music and lyrics even when the sources have sufficient info to do so. --K. Peake 09:21, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I have gone over where you have missed some things above. --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
 * You still need to remove the Metro refs and if there aren't any other sources for the info they provide, then delete that. --K. Peake 15:59, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Any plans to follow through with the above soon? --K. Peake 17:03, 14 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for removing the bad source; you had left some info there that was not backed up by the other refs but I deleted that since it was merely one sentence and an adjective. ✅ now, took a little longer than usual but to your avail evidently! --K. Peake 18:49, 14 February 2021 (UTC)