Talk:Wali Mohammed Wali

Assessment
Quite close to a B. The last paragraph about his life sounds a little too cheesy and can be rewritten. Also have corrected a few gramatical errors. Can extoll more about the social importance of Wali's poetry, Wali's inspirations etc. devil 06:16, 25 July 2007 (UTC)

His Death and Grave
His death details and about his grave can be added in a separate section. The breaking of his grave and building a road on it is more significant. A picture of the tarred road and its GPS location on the map also will be better. The worldwide reactions on breaking and building road can also be of more important, about how more he is remembered by the world. HotWick (talk) 22:21, 23 August 2011 (UTC)

Assessment comment
Substituted at 10:09, 30 April 2016 (UTC)