Talk:Walk Away (Christina Aguilera song)/GA1

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Reviewer: WikiRedactor (talk · contribs) 17:39, 17 July 2013 (UTC)

Looks like I have more time on my hands than I was expecting, so I'll take this one on. WikiRedactor (talk) 17:39, 17 July 2013 (UTC)


 * Infobox and introduction
 * One link that changes sub-domains.


 * It was not released as a single, so it doesn't have an actual release date.
 * But it was also released as a song, among with the album. Per many GAs about normal songs, they also have release date in their infobox, but not in the article


 * Please apply flat-lists to the infobox for WP:ACCESS.


 * "Walk Away is a song recorded by American recording artist Christina Aguilera" I'd remove the first "recorded" and change "recording artist" to "singer-songwriter" since she co-wrote much of her music from this album onward.
 * I think it's okay


 * "The song was written by Aguilera, Scott Storch and Matt Morris, with production handled by Storch. Aguilera and E. Dawk were credited as vocal producers" How about "It was written by Aguilera, Scott Storch, and Matt Morris. Production was handled by Storch, while Aguilera and E. Dawk serves as additional vocal producers"?


 * Is there any explanation why the song charted six years after the album was first released? If you can find that out, it would be worth including.
 * I have no idea either... &mdash; HĐ (talk) 02:23, 18 July 2013 (UTC)


 * Background and recording
 * Refer to Christina by her last name in the body of the article.


 * Change "management" to "manager" and remove the comments separating Steve Kurtz.


 * "By late 2000, Aguilera decided not to continue the contact with Kurtz." Remove and add the late 2000 bit into the following sentence.


 * "Following the event, Aguilera decided to create her new style of music on the following album." How about "Aguilera decided to take a more prominent role in the musical direction of her next record"?
 * No comma after alter ego.


 * You don't need the "changed her appearance bit" when you go into more detail anyways.


 * Italicize Stripped.


 * Explain a little more about the deception the lyrics you provided talk about.


 * Critical reception
 * Can you find some more reviews, the section could use some more meat to it.
 * That's all I can search


 * The "makes Aguilera shines" could be called a stand-out track for a better reading flow.


 * "Received one comparison to works of" to "Was compared to the works of".


 * Personnel
 * Rename as "Credits and personnel".

That should do it. I'll place the article on hold for a week. WikiRedactor (talk) 17:56, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Passed. WikiRedactor (talk) 17:46, 18 July 2013 (UTC)