Talk:Walraversijde

GA?
I've copied the following from my talk page, since it belongs here...


 * Dank [...] I much appreciate your offer to help with GAN if your offer still stands. I would like to do some GA work, and some hand holding at the beginning would be great. I have already approached another editor about taking a recent article to GA. It is a clearly defined topic, with reasonable sources and good images. It needs further expansion before it would be ready. But other articles might be better candidates. I would appreciate your thoughts? --Epipelagic (talk) 08:10, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Sure, I'm doing some copyediting now. British English, right? ("artefact").  I generally don't do images, but you'll want some commas where you have semicolons.  "As might be expected for a settlement preoccupied with the sea, the occupation density was much higher ...": Why?  "fifteenth century": I have no problem with that, but we're usually going with "15th".  "were the central figures in the village at the top of the social hierarchy.": possibly redundant, I'd consider losing "central figures".  - Dank (push to talk) 12:22, 27 April 2011 (UTC)