Talk:Walter Cook (VC)

Project assessment
From the language, it sounds as if parts of this article (the last sentence in particular) are taken directly from an official document, such as the Victoria Cross commendation. If this is the case, it should be noted as such. Otherwise, it seems strongly subjective to describe Cook as displaying "a courage, coolness and discipline which was the admiration of all who witnessed it.". LordAmeth 13:49, 14 November 2007 (UTC)