Talk:Walter Lohmann

bad!
@scope creep: what's bad with my copyedit? ltb d l (talk) 09:56, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
 * Your removed this sentence: "He was still in England when the Kapp Putsch occurred on 13 March 1920, so his career was not compromised" which comes directly from the source. Your removed the sentenced "failed to dent Lohmann's career". For some reason you don't think invasions don't impact peoples lives or career. You removed "gold". There is gold reichmarks. Your removed "clandestine". The whole article is about clandestine funds. And on top of that linked née, which links to a redirect, which is incorrect. That is a poor copyedit. Never copyedit an article when it just been started.   scope_creep Talk  10:05, 2 December 2023 (UTC)