Talk:Walter S. Feldman

Neutral tone problems
There is a problem with the MASSIVE wall of text added to this article in one chunk, much of the content is entirely unsourced and contains non neutral tone such as "a tireless painter, printmaker and mosaicist", "a beloved teacher at that institution", "saw Feldman continue to produce as a tireless painter, printmaker and mosaicist" "Feldman excelled in the medium of woodcut", "Feldman never ceased painting the haunting aftermath of his war experiences". "near death and harrowing rescue experiences left impressions" none of this is appropriate for an encyclopaedia article. Theroadislong (talk) 17:54, 29 September 2020 (UTC)
 * I see you have removed about 1700bytes of fluff; I removed another 1000. The war experiences section remains to be worked on further. )I normally remove such sections, but it does seem to have been a major influenceo n his work, so it should be kept and abbreviated.  DGG ( talk ) 17:50, 5 October 2020 (UTC)