Talk:Walter Stewart (general)

The trouble with this fine article
...is that it provides so much background information in each section that Walter Stewart's personal role in the events gets lost among other details. There's no consistent focus on the man who is the putative subject of the article. Lwarrenwiki (talk) 03:18, 15 December 2017 (UTC)
 * For that reason, it reads as a general history of several Revolutionary War battles and the Newburgh conspiracy, with Walter Stewart merely a WP:COATRACK to hang it on. Lwarrenwiki (talk) 21:47, 15 December 2017 (UTC)