Talk:Walter Thompson (composer)

NPOV
The subject of the article is interesting but the overall tone of the article is not very encyclopedic. There are a lot of peacock terms used. Needs to be rewritten from a standpoint of WP:NPOV. - Burpelson AFB ✈ 10:19, 1 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Hi, I added a couple of modifications in the last months to that page. I'd like to have feedback, just to know if it's better that way. I've also been working on the English version of the Soundpainting page. I actually created it. Who could I ask for reviews? Thanks in advance. AnnePernas (talk) 18:45, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
 * The Soudnpainting page has actually been approved and rated with a "B". So I guess it's pretty good, but I now need review on this one, as it's my first wiki-biography of a living person! AnnePernas (talk) 18:46, 21 May 2024 (UTC)

Hello Burpelson AFB -- Thank you for your input - I welcome any suggestions on correcting the article on Walter Thompson, Composer -- Best, Bobeejay  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bobeejay (talk • contribs) 11:41, 2 April 2011 (UTC)

Hello Burpelson AFB -- I am new at this and even when I read what it means by "citation needed", I do not understand how to fix the problem. "Mandrake....they want to tap our bodily fluids!" — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bobeejay (talk • contribs) 20:06, 4 April 2011 (UTC)