Talk:Walter Tullis/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:54, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 15:54, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 18:22, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
 * as a freshman, and was told remove comma
 * Done.
 * totaling 10 for 173 yards add "receptions"
 * Done.
 * expansion draft, but was unable to remove comma and link expansion draft
 * Done.
 * He was still coaching Alabama A&M by 1994, had moved to Savannah State by 1997, and by 1999 had returned to Weaver High School as a track coach a lot of repetitions of "by", try rewording
 * Reworded.
 * Ref spot check: #7, 8, 12, 14, 17, 20, 23, 27
 * BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:40, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 19:52, 20 October 2023 (UTC)