Talk:Walter Wu/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: NickGibson3900 (talk · contribs) 06:00, 10 October 2014 (UTC)

Will do soon - NickGibson3900 Talk 06:00, 10 October 2014 (UTC)


 * See below. Also please respond at the Brian Hill review as comments have been their for a couple of days now —  NickGibson3900 Talk 02:41, 23 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing this, but just to let you know that you forgot to put this "=onhold". The ping would work with me too. Just remember that echo (ping) would only trigger if you sign your post. In this case, you signed it, but put wrong username. Then you fixed it, that doesn't work. Give me minute to fix these. (same thing with Brian Hill) Thanks!

Comments

 * "176 centimetres (5.77 ft)" -
 * "86 kilograms (190 lb)" -
 * Link Athens Paralympic Games to 2004 Paralympic Games in lead
 * "and BC Disabled Athlete of the Year." - Link BC to British Columbia
 * I can't. "BC Disabled Athlete of the Year" is the name of the award, so either I can link it like BC Disabled Athlete of the Year or do nothing.
 * He has spent time as a public speaker since retirement from active sports competition. -
 * ✅ Is that better now?
 * FN2 needs author, day published and publisher (Maclean's)
 * FN5 is dead
 * ✅ Is that better now?
 * FN2 needs author, day published and publisher (Maclean's)
 * FN5 is dead
 * FN5 is dead

Round two

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * Numbers less than ten should be written out (e.g. four not 4)
 * Iink Canadian to Canada in lead
 * link backstroke at first mention
 * link freestyle at first mention
 * same with butterfly
 * link individual medley to Medley swimming
 * ✅ The "100 metre freestyle" are supposed to link to Swimming at the 1996 Paralympics - Men's 100 metre freestyle. That page doesn't exsist yet so I linked them all to Swimming at the 1996 Paralympics. Is that okay?  ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 20:26, 30 October 2014 (UTC)


 * What I mean is say something like: "Wu competed in the 100 metre freestyle" (i.e link the stroke) -  NickGibson3900 Talk 21:56, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
 * ✅ How is it now?   ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 22:02, 30 October 2014 (UTC)


 * , I don't mean the info box they were fine (revert those changes), I mean in the prose. Once that is fixed I'll pass it. -  NickGibson3900 Talk 22:09, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
 * {[ping|NickGibson3900}} Thanks for your patience with me. I linked them the first time seen in the article. Is it okay now? Thanks,  ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 22:20, 30 October 2014 (UTC)

Sorry to be a pain TheQ Editor, but you still need to change numbers 1-9 to words. The number 3 is still in the article. -  NickGibson3900 Talk 22:53, 30 October 2014 (UTC)
 * replaced both instances of 3 with three.  ΤheQ Editor   Talk? 23:51, 30 October 2014 (UTC)