Talk:Wandersong

Plot Section Needs Improvement
Previously the plot section was very basic and only contained the story from the prologue of the game. Now it is much improved, although very lengthy. It needs to be cut down so it only contains the most important parts of the plot. — Preceding unsigned comment added by PixelMage (talk • contribs) 19:33, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
 * My preference would've been to leave out a plot summary, but so many editors are insistent that there should be one. My fear of a overwritten section, either left unsourced or sourced with a dubious reference, has come true. I guess I'll have to find the time sometime soon to give it the proper treatment it needs, such as concise and short summaries and proper citations to the source material using Harvard citation no brackets and Cite AV media, rather than a single citation to a Fandom page, which comes under potentially unreliable sources. – PhilipTerryGraham (talk &middot;&#32;articles &middot;&#32;reviews) 02:30, 14 November 2019 (UTC)

Explain who The Bard is
Like Shakespeare? I'm sorry this summary is confusing — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A02:C7F:DC08:9000:7179:CC85:2A9C:FA6 (talk) 03:24, 2 December 2019 (UTC)
 * I added a clarification via link and appositive in lead, is it more clear now?PixelMage (talk) 02:19, 15 December 2019 (UTC)