Talk:Wang Guangyang

Is this article still confusing?
User:DoubleGrazing, User:SBD091, which parts of this article are still confusing? Issues I identified and attempted to address included referring to the same office with two different translations, presentation of material in a section ordered chronologically that was out of order and belonged in the lead, total lack of context, and poor translation in general.SBD091, I'm sorry I didn't have time to talk with you directly yesterday, but this article was previously draftified on 5 April 2023 and moved back to mainspace by its original author. Draftification policy prevents reviewers from unilaterally moving articles to draftspace a second time, so you'll always have to check for that in a page's history if you'll be using tools that can move articles across namespaces. Folly Mox (talk) 21:19, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Good start. Needs development per previously placed tag. Happy editing!

North8000 (talk) 13:11, 9 September 2023 (UTC)