Talk:Wang Jiaxiang

Untitled
No offense, but IMHO this page needs major editing.

Edit needed
I agree - It meanders from the point, has very bad English grammar (Whether this is due to incompetence or simply bad translations) and lacks titles etc. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.146.132.119 (talk) 11:09, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

gosh, i agree thoroughly. the page is all over the place and sounds like it was written by a party historian or something. i'll try to take a look at this and make lots of improvements later. It needs a total revision Happy   monsoon  day  16:22, 16 February 2016 (UTC)

moved out from the article
''carried out their policy of extremism and leftism, the CPC suffered enormous losses in their rebellion against the Kuomintang and had to retreat from big cities to their base in Jiangxi. Then Wang got promotion to be member of Central Bureau of CPC, Foreign Commissioner of China Soviet Republic Interim Central Government, and then Director of Political Department or General Commissar of the Chinese Red Army.''

''Bo Gu and military advisor from Comintern Otto Braun (Li De) still applied the policy of leftism which resulted in the CPC's great loss in their military confrontation with Kuomintang army in their base and Long March began as an excuse for withdraw. It was in the course of Long March, Wang began to realize the cruel reality of revolution was much different from anything he read in books. He showed his friendship to the so-called old CPC members such as Mao Zedong and Zhou Enlai. When they were in litters and held discussions about the future of the Chinese revolution, they had made a plan to change the status quo. Subsequently in the Zunyi Conference, Bo Gu and Li De were dismissed command in military. As reward for their defection, Zhang Wentian replaced Bo Gu as General Secretary of CPC, and Wang took the military command by a three-men group with Mao and Zhou.''

this was entirely unsourced and poorly written. Happy  monsoon  day  01:47, 24 February 2016 (UTC)