Talk:War College (Sweden)

English translation
The sources provided here are all in Swedish so I just wanted to verify the basis for the English name. Is there any source for this? Peter Isotalo 16:46, 9 October 2023 (UTC)


 * I was a bit uncertain about the translation, whether I should use 'Krigskollegium' or 'War College.' I haven't found 'War College' in any dictionaries; however, 'War College' appears as the translation of 'Krigskollegium' in the following books/journals/theses: /Saftgurka (talk) 14:07, 10 October 2023 (UTC)
 * I wasn't really doubtful about the translation, but I just wanted to make sure. Sometimes even obvious translations aren't actually published in reliable sources. Or they sometimes disagree. But this looks perfectly solid. I don't see a specific need to footnote the English name, but if you can include an English source that uses the term, it would be a nice improvement. Peter Isotalo 14:17, 10 October 2023 (UTC)



Lead
The lead starts out a bit too indirect and is a bit hard to follow. For starters, I recommend starting out with a simple "X is Y" sentence and how long it was around. The history, founding and all that will follow more naturally after establishing the article topic for the reader. Peter Isotalo 14:21, 10 October 2023 (UTC)