Talk:War Machine/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:55, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

Pretty good-looking, if hard to spot-check in its entirety given the source mix. Ping me when ready. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:44, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

Copy changes
Your copy is superbly clean. Not much to fix.

Lead

 * "Stand alone" should be one word

Publication history

 * Rhodes was first portrayed using Iron Man armor in Iron Man #169 (1983) when he had to fight a villain in the stead of a drunk and defeated Tony Stark. Add a comma after (1983)
 * This series also featured Deathlok and Cable, and it ran for twenty-five issues across two years.Something is missing as a causal link. Maybe This series, also featuring Deathlok and Cable, ran for twenty-five issues across two years.
 * writer Christos Gage wrote issues #33–35 of Iron Man: Director of S.H.I.E.L.D. in which War Machine replaced Iron Man as the main character add a comma after S.H.I.E.L.D.

Characterization

 * He believes that the role of superheroes goes beyond fighting supervillains, and that they should also take action against global problems such as world hunger and oppressive governments. That's a WP:CINS comma that should go.

Supporting characters

 * Danvers' return MOS:'S should be "Danvers's"

Sourcing and spot checks
Harv error: Zehr 2011 does not have a citation to point to.

Spot checking is tough with this one because some of the most-used refs (Chambliss) are not easily available. Chambliss is really frequently called, so this is a bit frustrating. I had to settle for half of the spot checks I'd normally make... I don't have any qualms with what I've found, though.


 * 29: War Machine steps in for the fallen Iron Man ... In the past, Rhodey's always been the guy who goes into battle himself-sure, he's led men into combat, but he's never been the kind of man to sit behind the lines making the big decisions. This checks out. ✅
 * 43: Wizard review checks out.
 * 54: Lists Cheadle's appearances. ✅

Images
A cover with NFUR is supplied and justified. Encouragement: Add alt text.


 * , I've addressed the issues you listed. The big ugly alien  ( talk ) 04:53, 9 March 2024 (UTC)


 * And Zehr checks out now that it's inserted. Everything looks good. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 05:08, 9 March 2024 (UTC)