Talk:War of the Antiochene Succession/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:58, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:58, 28 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * For an article of this length the lead should at most have two paras.


 * Article
 * Fairly well-written, so here are a few nitpicks.
 * Maybe wikilink "suzerainty" (Background) and "emir" (First phase)
 * Duplink: Stephanie of Armenia (Aftermath)
 * Rest is flawless to my eyes. Excellently arranged and broad in coverage, bravo!


 * , thank you for your review and comments. Sorry, I was busy in real life for two days. I modified the text. Please let me know if any further action is needed. Borsoka (talk) 03:15, 1 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, promoted. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 08:32, 1 July 2016 (UTC)