Talk:War of the Euboeote Succession/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk · contribs) 19:42, 4 May 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * prose:  (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * 2) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments
1. May/June 1258 Suggest not 100% on the Wiki policy with this but I believe it looks neater with May-June 1258

2. Wiki link for fief and suzerain

3. famed Achaean cavalry. Why where they famous?

4. turned to her rival, Genoa Suggest turned to his rival, Genoa

5. Already from the. Suggest - from the

6. after by none other than. Suggest - after by

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 12:36, 2 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Hello and thanks for the review! On 1., the sense here is "in either May or June", not "in the period May-June", so the slash is more accurate. 2. done. 3. The Achaean knights were known even in western Europe as the flower of chivalry, and were certainly the best cavalry in Greece at the time. I'll try to track down a concrete reference for this. 4. Here the meaning of "her rival" is "Venice's rival", not "William's rival". 5. & 6., done. Constantine  ✍  16:14, 5 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Passed. Nice job Cplakidas. Thurgate (talk) 13:10, 7 May 2012 (UTC)