Talk:Wario Land: Shake It — Amazing Footage!/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV (talk · contribs) 10:49, 29 May 2020 (UTC)

I'll review this, expect comments within a few days.--AlexandraIDV 10:49, 29 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Infobox and lead
 * What's the reason for putting Goodby and Silverstein on the same row in the infobox but everyone else on their own?
 * When I first read this article, I did not realize what "It was later replaced by..." meant until getting to that part in the article body. I think being clear and saying something like "It was later taken down and replaced by" might be good.


 * Video
 * "Viewers can pick up elements" - if the ad is no longer available as an interactive thing, then this should be in past tense
 * Are there any sources you can cite for this section, considering the ad no longer exists in its interactive form (and thus can't really be used as a source for this)


 * Reception
 * This is one long paragraph - readability would be helped a lot by splitting it into two.
 * "acros" should be "across"


 * Images
 * The non-free use rationale calls the screenshot "cover art".


 * Other comments
 * Although not strictly necessary to meet the GA criteria, I would strongly suggest adding alt text to the image for accessibility reasons.
 * Does an official non-interactive video upload of this exist? If so, it would be helpful to add an external link to it.
 * Notes sections typically go before references, as footnotes (even if that is not the case here) themselves may contain references.

Not a lot of problems with this one! I'll put the review on hold for seven days - @ me when you have addressed the issues above, or if you have any questions.--AlexandraIDV 14:51, 1 June 2020 (UTC)
 * All issues addressed. c: - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 15:05, 1 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you! I will promote the article to GA now~!--AlexandraIDV 15:15, 1 June 2020 (UTC)