Talk:Warlocked/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dr Salvus (talk · contribs) 18:23, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

Hey. I've decided that this would be my first GA review ever. I'm gonna review this tomorrow. Dr Salvus 18:23, 29 March 2022 (UTC) :

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Discussion
, you've litteraly written an excellent article. Unfortunatley, not being a native speaker, I'll have to review the grammar tomorrow (and I'll be helped by a friend who's got a better English). It's my first review, so I apologise for possible errors. Do remember to add a caption as the photo doesn't have it. Dr</b> <b style="font-family: Verdana; color: #6633FF;">Salvus</b> 21:42, 29 March 2022 (UTC)


 * What do you mean the photo does have a caption. GamerPro64  21:47, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
 * , oh sorry, hadn't seen it <b style="font-family: Verdana; color: #6633FF;">Dr</b> <b style="font-family: Verdana; color: #6633FF;">Salvus</b> 21:48, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
 * @GamerPro64 today, I'm very sick (I may have contracted Covid), so won't be able to review the grammar for a few days. <b style="font-family: Verdana; color: #6633FF;">Dr</b> <b style="font-family: Verdana; color: #6633FF;">Salvus</b> 16:32, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
 * @GamerPro64, I'm fine enough to do this and I'm 99,9% asyntomatic. These are my friend's grammatical corrections.
 * Music for Warlocked was composed by Jeroen Tel. -> The music for Warlocked was composed by Jeroen Tel.
 * A sequel was planned for the Game Boy Advance titled Wizards but was cancelled. -> A sequel was planned for the Game Boy Advance titled Wizards but it was cancelled.
 * The studio later went on to make unrelated games for other consoles [...] -> The studio continued to make unrelated games for other consoles [...]
 * That's what I've got. <b style="font-family: Verdana; color: #6633FF;">Dr</b> <b style="font-family: Verdana; color: #6633FF;">Salvus</b> 19:11, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
 * All done. GamerPro64  04:06, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
 * @Dr Salvus Thank you for your GA Review, I appreciate you resolving the issue of the previous review I left. PerryPerryD  Talk To Me 19:54, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments from BlackShadowG
Hi,, I have translated the entire article into Chinese and nominated a GAC there as well. Our editors found that the "Development and release" section is too short, I think these two sources may be helpful in writing this section. -- BlackShadowG (talk) 04:16, 3 April 2022 (UTC)