Talk:Warlord of Kayan

Created Warlord of Kayan
It is a historic documentary movie with presence on internet and online TV and video platforms including Prime, Roku, Amazon, Apple TV, etc. It tells the story of a powerful warlord and military commander from a famous place in Afghanistan. There are many relevant pages on Wikipedia about the root and family of the commander, about his place, his ethnicity, faith and work. Jeff B. Harmon, a renowned American film director, photographe and journalist has worked to document the stories from many different countries that have gone through war and conflicts including Afghanistan, has directed and produced this movie with the purpose of contributing to the history of Aghanistan, specifically the civil war era post the Soviet withdrawals. Sanchoof (talk) 02:29, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

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@Sanchoof I see you keep removing my tags to the page without actually improving it. I will give you an example of issues I see: "unique life journey", "these details humanize Naderi", "the complex interplay", "Naderi's leadership skills had propelled him to significant roles" are cases of WP:PUFFERY which should be avoided when writing an encyclopedic article from a neutral point of view. These are only examples from the lead section, the page is full of peacock terms. These issues should be fixed and you should not remove the tag until they are. Broc (talk) 08:22, 12 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you Broc. Will work further with more detailed checks and consideration of those points you mentioned Sanchoof (talk) 10:22, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
 * @Sanchoof replacing "prominent" with "notable" or "key" with "influential" does not change anything. You need to get rid of loaded language altogether. Please read the policy linked above, WP:PUFFERY. Broc (talk) 12:57, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Hi Broc,
 * Could you please review the article and consider removing the banner (ads)? I believe it has been significantly refined. Additionally, can you check why it isn't appearing in search engines like Google? Is there an option for admins to enable or disable search engine crawling? Your input and assistance would be greatly appreciated.
 * Thank you. Sanchoof (talk) 02:12, 14 May 2024 (UTC)