Talk:Wash All Over Me/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 07:56, 17 September 2016 (UTC)

Soon... Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:56, 17 September 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * and Kanye West. Additional → connect sentences with a semicolon
 * Tommy Brown with Charlie Heat serving as co-producer → Tommy Brown, with Charlie Heat serving as a co-producer
 * The actual version was released on March 6, 2015. The demo version was predominantly influenced by disco and house music, which was essentially reworked in the album cut. → The actual version was made available on March 6, 2015, whilst its precedent mix was predominantly influenced by disco and house music before being reworked in the album cut.
 * finds Madonna → portrays Madonna
 * It was generally → The recording was generally
 * music critics → link to music journalism
 * with majority comparing → with the majority of them comparing

Background and release

 * In mid 2014, Madonna uploaded → In mid 2014, she
 * Madonna to take → Madonna taking
 * tracks onto → tracks through
 * pre-order → plural version
 * Twelve additional tracks were also leaked, rumored to be produced by Avicii → Following this, Avicii was rumored to have produced twelve additional recordings that subsequently leaked.
 * The demo was → The demo version of "Wash All Over Me"
 * link "disco" and "house" to their respective articles.
 * The album in its entirety was leaked online → Rebel Heart was leaked online in its entirety
 * before its → in advance to its
 * "Wash All Over Me" the album version was released on March 6, 2015 → The final mix of "Wash All Over Me" was subsequently released with its parent record on March 6, 2015.

Recording and composition

 * Image > Set a full stop after the sentence
 * Tommy Brown. The track was produced by Madonna, Avicii, Dean and West, with Charlie Heat serving as a co-producer. → Tommy Brown, whilst being produced by... ; Charlie Heat served as a co-producer.
 * did the engineering → provided the engineering
 * Pontare recorded → Pontare also recorded
 * "Wash All Over Me" is a slow → Musically, ...
 * contains the usage of → makes use of a
 * the lyrics: → remove ":"
 * spoke of them: → expressed that,
 * In the second verse, she sings → The track's second verse portrays Madonna singing
 * The singer makes → The singer further makes
 * between", and later makes the comparison: → between". She later concludes that,

Critical reception

 * concluding by calling it → further called it
 * explaining that "This → explaining that, "This
 * Furthermore, Nelson stated → Nelson went on stating that
 * describing it as: → remove ":"

Credits and personnel

 * Credits and personnel adapted from Madonna's official website → You may place this above the section.

Outcome
for 7 days. Good luck with editing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:34, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
 * All done! Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 22:01, 18 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Passing! Great work as usual. Congrats! Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:30, 19 September 2016 (UTC)