Talk:Washington Park, Elmhurst Illinois

Grant4493 (talk) 16:39, 20 April 2018 (UTC)Is this source okay for me to us in my Wikipedia page. I am creating this page about a local park in my community. I wanted to add more information about how much the park cost to build. As well as just get some more information, because there are not many sources about Washington park in Elmhurst Illinois. Thank you feedback would be appreciated. Link to page is belowGrant4493 (talk) 16:39, 20 April 2018 (UTC)

https://www.playlsi.com/en/commercial-playground-equipment/playgrounds/washington-park/

Kyle's Peer Review
What you have so far looks good. However, I would add a little more. Some examples of topics you can add are geographic location, parking, and hours the park is open. I realize that you already put the location under the "history" section, but this way you can add a little bit more by moving that information to its own tab. Since I am also creating a page for a park, these are the topics I also included. Another thing that I would do is fix your citations. Instead of having just the links, make them mla format. Other than that, you should be all set, nice job.

Ryans Peer Review
The first thing I noticed was the list of amenities. Maybe you should work it into a paragraph so it doesn't seem like an advertisement for the park. Im redoing the Morton Arboretum page because there is a flag on the page that says its too much like an advertisement. I'm assuming its because the majority of the article is what the Arboretum has to offer, like recreational activities. So i would suggest being careful about how you work it in.