Talk:Washington State Route 142/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rschen7754 (talk · contribs) 22:06, 14 September 2019 (UTC)


 * History
 * The railroad was completed in April 1903, via a route along the Klickitat River Canyon to Wahkiacus and Swale Creek to the southern outskirts of Goldendale. - with the repeated "to" construction the sentence is less clear.
 * Fixed by adding "before reaching"
 * incorporated into a branch of a major railroad - do we know which one? Also, the repeated "railroad" in this sentence makes it more confusing.
 * The sentence meant to say that the Lyle branch was supplementary to the northern bank railroad (which was the mainline of the SP&S Company). I have reworded it to make it clearer.
 * shorter and longer bridges - could use a bit more explanation
 * Added descriptors (west and east).

Couldn't find any other issues. Should be a pass once these issues are fixed. --Rschen7754 22:38, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I have fixed all three issues that were raised.  Sounder Bruce  03:46, 15 September 2019 (UTC)