Talk:Washington State Route 162/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 03:11, 4 February 2013 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)

 I will place the article on hold for a couple fixes to be made.  Dough 48  72  03:20, 4 February 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * The route description has a lot of long and choppy sentences such as "The highway continues south through rural Pierce County, following a Ballard Terminal Railroad line and the Pierce County Foothills Trail to the west and the Puyallup River to the east,[5][6] serving the community of Alderton." and "SR 162 crosses the Puyallup River on the McMillin Bridge, listed on the National Register of Historical Places,[8] west of its confluence with the Carbon River and becomes Washington Avenue, traveling southeast through Orting and serving Orting High School." I would suggest either rewording or splitting them.
 * Split and reworded
 * The sentence "The McMillin Bridge is being replaced by WSDOT with a newer, wider span over the Puyallup River scheduled for construction in 2014 because of the older bridge showing signs of deterioration due to age." needs to be reworded and split.
 * Moved deteriorating to describe the bridge (in front) and removed the last section
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Is it really important to mention repaving and the installation of guardrails in the history?
 * No other work has been done to the highway and will be done (except the bridge replacement).
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Responded to your comments.  Sounder Bruce  06:10, 4 February 2013 (UTC)
 * I will now pass the article.  Dough 48  72  15:36, 4 February 2013 (UTC)