Talk:Washington State Route 522/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 07:58, 28 June 2017 (UTC)

Otherwise, it's fine. YE Pacific Hurricane  07:58, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
 * "Its western half is primarily an arterial street, named Lake City Way and Bothell Way, following the northern shore of Lake Washington; the eastern half is a grade-separated freeway between Woodinville and Monroe" is it a grade seperate freeway between Woodinville or Monroe or the eastern half? YE Pacific Hurricane  07:58, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ Clarified it a bit by saying it "runs between Woodinville and Monroe".
 * "the eastern half is a grade-separated freeway between Woodinville and Monroe." link to Grade separation. YE Pacific Hurricane  07:58, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ Done.
 * "The road later became a branch of Primary State Highway 2 in 1937 and was extended east to Redmond and North Bend." in this instance you should clarify this is SR522. YE Pacific Hurricane  07:58, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
 * ❌ I don't think it needs to be clarified in this specific instance, since the branch highway is succeeding the Red Brick Road, which was mentioned a sentence prior to be part of modern SR 522.
 * " The highway makes a 180-degree turn south to intersect with US 2, where it terminates; " optional, but I'd use the ° symbol here. YE Pacific Hurricane  07:58, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
 * ❌ I'd rather keep the spelled-out version.
 * " The first section of the highway, traveling 7 miles (11 km) from Ravenna Park in Seattle to Lake Forest Park,[20] was completed in 1907 and was pronounced as one of the "finest pieces of road to be found anywhere in the United States".[21][22] From 1911 to 1913,[23] the state and county government paved 4 miles (6.4 km)" why are miles all of a sudden spelled out after it's first useage when it's not spelled out in the infobox? (There are other instances of this as well) YE Pacific Hurricane  07:58, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ Abbreviated all instances of miles outside of the lead sentence, where it should remain. The infobox was never designed to spell out units anyway, so that can't be changed.
 * "Long-term plans from the Washington State Department of Transportation for increasing traffic congestion" who on earth would want to increase traffic congestion? 07:58, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ Oops. Fixed that.
 * I believe that does it.  Sounder Bruce  08:20, 28 June 2017 (UTC)