Talk:Washington State Route 529/GA1

GA Review
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Comments: I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 17:02, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) The sentence "The 7.88-mile (12.68 km) long roadway extends north from an interchange with Interstate 5 (I-5), numbered exit 193, past the western terminus of U.S. Route 2 (US 2), its spur route, Downtown Everett and Naval Station Everett to cross the Snohomish River and the Steamboat Slough to interchange with I-5, numbered exit 198, before crossing the Ebey Slough and entering Marysville to end at SR 528." is wordy and needs to be split.
 * 2) I don't think traffic counts from 1980 are accurate in the route description.
 * 3) Do not use "then" in describing progression of route.
 * 4) "and intersecting various streets": intersecting should be intersects.
 * 5) "the older alignment of the roadway and US 99 and Marine View Drive" sounds awkward.
 * 6) "part of the Delta neighborhood of Everett, named after the delta of the Snohomish River located to the southwest": remove comma after Everett and add "that is" in its place.
 * 7) underpass redirects to tunnel and I do not think it is relevant in that context.
 * 8) The sentence "Between 2005 and 2008, exit 192 on I-5 was reconstructed and a new flyover ramp from I-5 northbound to Broadway northbound was added and the 41st Street interchange was transformed into a single-point urban interchange." is wordy.
 * 9) The sentence "State Road 1 was replaced by Primary State Highway 1 (PSH 1) in the Primary state highways, created in 1937." sounds awkward.
 * 10) Democratic Party needs to be disambiguated to Democratic Party (United States)
 * 11) Template:Shban should be added for SR 529 Spur in the Spur route section.
 * Yes check.svg All Done –CG 14:50, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 21:49, 28 July 2009 (UTC)