Talk:Washington State Route 538/GA1

GA Review
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Comments: I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 15:42, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) In the lead, is it really important to have a sentence indicating Mount Vernon is the county seat of Skagit County?
 * 2) In sentence "The highway, which has existed as a county road since 1911, travels from Interstate 5 (I-5) in the west, passing former U.S. Route 99 (US 99), now Riverside Drive and Skagit Valley College's main Mount Vernon campus before terminating at a roundabout with SR 9.", add comma after "Riverside Drive".
 * 3) From what I see, SR 538 was originally SSH 1G, not SSH 3G. This needs to be fixed in the lead.
 * 4) "the Mount Vernon campus of the Skagit Valley College is passed on the north side of the highway" sounds awkward.
 * 5) "The I-5 freeway wasn't built until after 1966": do not use contractions.
 * 6) "spring 2009": do not use seasons as it is assumes readers are from northern hemisphere.
 * 7) Citation needed for mileage in Major intersections table.
 * Done –CG 15:56, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 16:06, 10 October 2009 (UTC)