Talk:Watch the Throne/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 17:45, 31 July 2012 (UTC)

Info box

 * No issues.

Lead

 * Link music critics


 * Done

Background

 * Jay appeared → Jay-Z appeared
 * on January of 2011, → in January 2011,
 * Jay stated that the less → Jay-Z stated that the less
 * that "Life Off" was → Is it mean't to say Life and not Lift?
 * Link Frank Ocean in the picture.


 * All done, "Life Off" was a typo

Music and style

 * Who is that picture of? What does it have to do with the section?


 * Clarified the use of the visual, changed photo to one that was easier to decipher the meaning of. Done?

Lyrical themes

 * No issues.

Content

 * Singer Ocean and The-Dream → I assume this is Frank Ocean. Also, it should be "singers", plural.


 * Done

Release and promotion

 * No issues.

Singles

 * January 11 → Can you add the years to all dates please, as it is getting a bit confusing.


 * Clarified.


 * You don't need to keep saying Billboard Hot 100 apart from the first time. Hot 100 is fine from then on.


 * Done.


 * peaked at 44. → On the??


 * Clarified.

Critical response

 * No issues.

Commercial performance

 * Unlink Billboard


 * Done.


 * This could be expanded more with some European info.


 * Expanded. Correctly?

Accolades

 * No issues.

Track listing

 * No issues.

Personnel

 * Why are Jay and West not listed as writers?


 * Added.

Charts and certifications

 * No issues.
 * A release history table would be good.


 * Unneeded; as explained in the release section, to avoid leaks, the album was released internationally on the same date onto iTunes.

Summary
On hold for 7 days. Aaron  &bull; You Da  One 17:52, 4 August 2012 (UTC)


 * I believe I have addressed your concerns. Bruce Campbell (talk) 22:08, 4 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Passing. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 22:19, 4 August 2012 (UTC)