Talk:Water (Kanye West song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 03:29, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Hey Kyle Peake, I will start my review now. LOVI 33  03:29, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Remove wikilink to Kanye West under songwriters WP:OVERLINK
 * Per Template:Infobox song, only lead producers should be credited in the infobox, therefore remove, Angel Lopez, Vindver and Timbaland
 * ✅ for the above even though I had already set these credits properly before this edit switched things around --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)


 * "Clemons and West had a conversation about Jesus, which the song came from" → "The song came from a conversation between Clemons and West about Jesus"
 * ✅ --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Background and recording

 * First paragraph is really long, maybe split it up into a few?
 * ✅ how's that look? --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)


 * [sic] → [sic], using Template:Sic
 * ✅ --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

 * Looks Good!

Release and promotion

 * No problems found, looks good!

Critical reception

 * Looks good!

Commercial performance

 * "entered at number 51 on the US Billboard Hot 100" → "entered the US Billboard Hot 100 at number 51"
 * "the track gave Clemons his first appearance on the Hot 100" → "the track gave Clemons his first appearance on the chart"
 * ✅ --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * Change title to just "Personnel," "Credits and personnel" is used when there are recording locations involved
 * Are you sure about this? I was thinking that stuff like "recording engineer", "associated performer" and "mastering engineer" makes it titled as of current? --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Okay fair enough, Keep it as is. LOVI  33  13:37, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Charts

 * Looks good!

Final comments and verdict

 * for now. Just a few small changes and I will promote it to GA. Amazing work on the article by the way. LOVI  33  04:06, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Have made proper fixes for the changes apart from that one. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , Okay thats a ✅. LOVI  33  13:37, 3 July 2020 (UTC)