Talk:Water sustainability at UBC

Dear Editor,

I have made some changes to my wikipedia page and was hoping if you could provide me with some feedback if I have fixed up the previous suggestions and also on how to improve my page!

Thank you so much!

Sharon

Hi Sharon,

I really enjoyed your topic. I thought that there was good amount of information. I thought that more examples could have been used to better illustrate your points. Moreover, if you could have taken some pictures, it would have made your page more visually appealing and interesting. Keep up the good work!

Shannon Keefe — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shannon keefe3 (talk • contribs) 22:55, 11 April 2013 (UTC)