Talk:We're Back! A Dinosaur's Story (film)/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:43, 9 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 14:43, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks. BTW, I just reviewed your nomination for The Lighthouse. 👨x🐱 (talk) 02:31, 10 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Add a non-free use rationale for the poster.
 * The fair use rationale is already there. It's a section instead of a template. You might've missed it. Would you like me to convert it to a template anyway to avoid confusion? 👨x🐱 (talk) 00:54, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Yeah, that's what I meant (it's better to have a template than writing it out).  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 01:05, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Done 👨x🐱 (talk) 01:31, 13 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Is there a reason the "Starring by" parameter, the cast in the lead, and #Voice_cast are listed in different ways?
 * (1) Because there's no "starring" bill in the poster (which was also true for another Amblimation film, Fievel Goes West, so the best option was to use how the cast was listed in the beginning)
 * (2) The cast list section is for how the actors are ordered in the end credits.
 * (3) I've ordered the voices in the lead per the end credits order. 👨x🐱 (talk) 00:54, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 * An unspoken rule is that the poster serves as a source for the infobox. However, Amblin Entertainment and the editors are not included in the poster or in the body of the article. Per MOS:INFOBOX, add sources, mention them in the body, or remove them from the infobox. Additionally, the running time also needs a source.
 * All done. It's really Amblimation that worked on the film, which is already in the lead and body, so removed Universal and Amblin Entertainment. I've added a citation for the editors. You know, people who are credited in the fields of Template:Infobox film don't necessarily need their credits sourced because there's, you know, the end credits of the film itself crediting them, right? It's the same reason plot sections don't need citations. The film itself is the citation. Also used NY Times review as source for runtime. 👨x🐱 (talk) 00:54, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 * The given citation doesn't mention Sim Evan-Jones as an editor.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 01:06, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Removed named. She was actually a supervising editor according to AFI 👨x🐱 (talk) 01:21, 13 April 2021 (UTC)


 * In this section and in others, is the title We're Back! A Dinosaur Story or We're Back: A Dinosaur Story? Try to be consistent.
 * Good catch. I always thought it was "A Dinosaur Story". I never noticed the "'s" Anyway, fixing this. 👨x🐱 (talk) 00:54, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Actually, you made the good catch. I was referring to the uses of an "!" and ":" in between the title.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 01:07, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Used formatting of poster which used the exclamation point. 👨x🐱 (talk) 11:59, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

 * The plot section passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * "accidently" "accidentally"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:03, 12 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "citizens panic".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:03, 12 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a serial comma after "Louie, Cecilia".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:03, 12 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Cast section looks good.

Production

 * This section looks good.
 * Image is free to use so that's good.

Release and promotion

 * "Dinosaur renaissance" "dinosaur renaissance" (per article linked)
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:06, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Second use of the term also needs to be changed.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 01:08, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 01:56, 13 April 2021 (UTC)


 * "in a American suburb" "in an American suburb"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:06, 12 April 2021 (UTC)


 * "Storyto American theaters" "Story to American theaters"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:06, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * "gross $135 million" "gross of $135 million"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:21, 12 April 2021 (UTC)


 * "highest grossing" "highest-grossing"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:21, 12 April 2021 (UTC)


 * "film another indicator" "film an indicator" (first mentioned reason)
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:21, 12 April 2021 (UTC)


 * #Critical_response looks great!
 * "best animated" "best-animated"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:22, 12 April 2021 (UTC)


 * "ninth worst" "ninth-worst"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:22, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

Progress
Absolute thanks to User:Chompy Ace for his contributions! 👨x🐱 (talk) 12:51, 13 April 2021 (UTC)