Talk:We're Good/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:52, 27 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "the reached" – typo?
 * "as well as surreality of it" "as well as the surreality of it"
 * Remove the comma after "with the production".
 * "Lipa's uses" "Lipa uses"
 * "ones solo recovery" "one's solo recovery"
 * Be consistent with "break up" and "breakup".
 * Remove MOS:CONTRACTIONS ("wont", "isn't", "didn't")
 * "it's release" "its release"
 * "to backlash she face" "to the backlash she faced"
 * "one of the first time" "one of the first times"
 * "the albums deluxe reissue" "the album's deluxe reissue"
 * "nervous releasing" "nervous about releasing"
 * Add a comma between "however she".
 * "Lipa's took inspiration" "Lipa took inspiration"
 * "first-week sales 13,763 units" "first-week sales of 13,763 units"
 * "Netherlands" "the Netherlands"
 * "a love story between to lobsters interesting and she didn't know that lobsters could convey that much emotion" – reword
 * "predicts what the future in terms of what the passengers will soon experience" – reword
 * "the ships corridors" "the ship's corridors"
 * "The camera the pans" – reword
 * "the song's final lines lines" – reword
 * "the lobsters used in the video is" "the lobsters used in the video are"
 * "the songs themes" "the song's themes"
 * Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark references from The Wall Street Journal with "|url-access=subscription".
 * Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:55, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for another review . I have put in place all your suggestions. Let me know if anything else needs to be done. LOVI  33  04:04, 29 July 2021 (UTC)