Talk:WeRobotics

Need a second opinion
Dear, I'm not sure whether this entity passes the WP:NCORP. It has been passed and marked reviewed but I still have reservation on it. Your expert opinion matters. could you assist? -Hatchens (talk) 07:34, 28 December 2021 (UTC)


 * @Hatchens As written, the article is poor, listing things rather than fair, continuous prose. The subject is notable, but has not been presented in a useful manner. Referencing is sufficient to demonstrate notability, but is not used well. Fiddle Timtrent  Faddle Talk to me 10:29, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi both, I recognize the points about the writing. I've made a few tweaks, which may or may not address your concerns. CT55555 (talk) 11:48, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
 * @CT55555 May I suggest taking a good look at your references, whcih are useful. Read User:Timtrent/A good article whcih is one of many essays on article creation. Look at the process outlined within it, and turn your references into a storyboard of what you want to write.. Then paragraph why paragraph, rewrite the article based on the sources. Be careful to use your own words.
 * Having a draft accepted is the start of the process. Turning a newly accepted article into a finished product is a task for not only you, but the community as a whole, but you are a great place to start. All you can do is your best. Fiddle Timtrent  Faddle Talk to me 12:05, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks @User:Timtrent I read some stuff by AfC people about keeping it short and simple to prove notability and then adding in more later. I've created a few new, this one is indeed shorter than others, so I'll consider this a work in progress and keep adding to it. CT55555 (talk) 12:17, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
 * @CT55555 Short and simple got it accepted. Good. I've made a few small edits within it to give it a better framework. Amnarea to look at  Yes, it has worked there, but what did the references say about it and what it did. At present they are used to verify that it was present. Once you get to what is said about it then the flesh starts to arrive on the bones.
 * I think you aimed for brevity and overshot a little! That does not detract from the a cetane, nor the fact that it is presented to us and verified by references as notable. Fiddle Timtrent  Faddle Talk to me 12:22, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
 * I've rewritten much of it, based on the feedback above. Ping @User talk:Timtrent @Hatchens CT55555 (talk) 13:57, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
 * @CT55555 Looks much improved, thank you. Fiddle Timtrent  Faddle Talk to me 15:15, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
 * @User:Timtrent Are you satisfied if I remove the "clean up" tag? CT55555 (talk) 15:19, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
 * @CT55555 Sorry, please go ahead. I could have done that, but failed! Fiddle Timtrent  Faddle Talk to me 15:21, 28 December 2021 (UTC)