Talk:Weaves (EP)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 14:45, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm MarioSoulTruthFan and I will be reviewing this article over the next days, please hold on any fixes until I say so. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:45, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Reference for Indie pop genre? Should also be in the composition
 * Citation in composition section editorEهեইдအ😎 03:40, 13 July 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * the other third having production from David Newfeld → re-word
 * Fixed editorEهեইдအ😎 03:15, 14 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Should make a reference of each single, don' say only "EP was promoted with four singles,"
 * Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:15, 14 July 2016 (UTC)
 * The same goes for the music videos and do you know the name of the tour?
 * The source I cited for the tour didn't really give the name of the tour, so I can't say. Named the music videos also editorEهեইдအ😎 03:15, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

Production and composition

 * Flawless.

Promotion

 * "as the magazine described" → remove this part
 * Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
 * "strong voice." → end quote and then full stop.
 * Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * "Praises included the use and combination of many styles" → sounds too informal
 * Fixed editorEهեইдအ😎 03:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
 * "...band." → end quote and then full stop.
 * Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
 * "...chaos." → same as previous
 * Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Should mention Now magazine on the review part as well as Exclaim.ca just like the other magazines.
 * Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:36, 13 July 2016 (UTC)

Track listing
Sorry, my bad. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:20, 14 July 2016 (UTC)
 * All songs written and composed by Jasmyn Burke and Morgan Waters. → All songs written by Jasmyn Burke and Morgan Waters and produced by them excepted when noted. + add a source
 * Burke didn't produce any of the tracks, so I'm not going to add "produced by them excepted when noted" in this case. Also added source.

Credits and personnel

 * Use
 * Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:39, 13 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Instead of "source" → Credits adapted from liner notes of Weaves (EP):
 * Done editorEهեইдအ😎 03:39, 13 July 2016 (UTC)

Release history
Why two sources?
 * They're showing the album had both a CD and digital release. editorEهեইдအ😎 03:15, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

Overall GA review
I've completed the review, I'll put it on hold for a week, once you have adressed the issues I raised please ping me. Thanks, glad to see that I'm doing a difference here and there. Passing MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:35, 14 July 2016 (UTC)
 * All comments have been addressed. These reviews have been great and very useful in improving my other content as well.