Talk:Webchick

Passive Voice
Please rework it to explain who said this about the webchick and provide a reference.
 * The fragment "...is known as one of the early pioneering forces of web design..." needs to be reworked.
 * Ditto for the phrase "...which was recognized for its creative and technical excellence alongside...". Rework it to show who recognized them and provide a source.

As it reads this article seems like a commercial. TheRingess 05:10, 7 December 2005 (UTC)

Great improvements, however, you should rewrite the line "...which was recognized in the early days of web development..." so as to specify who recognized them (So and So recognized enviromedia....) and give a source. TheRingess 19:38, 7 December 2005 (UTC)

Hi...it's kind of difficult to sum up. Does the citation I added at the end of the phrase help clarify the issue?

Why is it difficult to sum up? a phrase like "...which was recognized..." implies that someone/something/some organization/group of organizations/committe/fellowship/college/etc. did the actual recognizing. And if they did, and did it publicly, there should be a record of it somewhere. Providing at least the year that the company was recognized also helps a lot. Otherwise the sentence is not easily verifiable by a reader and makes the article look self-aggrandizing. P.S. remember to sign your comments with 4 ~'s. TheRingess 20:28, 7 December 2005 (UTC)