Talk:Wedding industry in the United States/Archives/2014

Further suggestions
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 23:46, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
 * Consider adding more links to the article; per Manual of Style (links) and Build the web, create links to relevant articles. Starting with the lead, there are sections in desperate need of links.
 * Images should have concise captions.
 * Per Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called  ==The Biography== , it should be changed to  ==Biography== .
 * This article does not have any categories. Please categorize it with relevant.
 * Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
 * Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “ All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
 * Avoid contractions, such as aren't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
 * Fixed as of 3/4/2014 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.2.87.198 (talk) 22:38, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
 * As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
 * The first reference link is dead Seaneseor (talk) 15:22, 6 January 2014 (UTC)