Talk:Weesperplein metro station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 20:54, 9 October 2022 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the ✅ tag to state when something is addressed.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Lede

 * I feel like we should link to Metro station in the first instance, rther than Austrian Metro.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Österreich? You mean Amsterdam Metro? Done. :)


 * We don't generally link to large landmasses, (in this case Netherlands)/  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Removed overlink.


 * Asbestos was found during a renovation in 2011 - this is quite a short sentence. Probably needs expanding or removing from the lede.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Replaced asbestos with something else.


 * The station was renovated again during 2017 and 2018. A new elevator and two new - lots of new's.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Replaced second new with additional.


 * was used as a fallout shelter - when was it used as a fallout shelter?  Lee Vilenski  (talk • contribs) 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Pretty much since the cancellation of the line in 1975 (now added) until 1999 (already in the next sentence).

General

 * Why is one image on the left?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Do you want more or less images on the left?
 * I can't say I care, but either all to the right, or alternate.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:19, 10 October 2022 (UTC)


 * You probably don't need to give times for the YouTube clip, unless you give time range. A start time on it's own is pointless.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Added as a range.


 * In April 2017, the Gemeente Vervoerbedrijf (GVB) - you don't actually use this acronym again in the article, so there's no need to explain it.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Removed in both prose and infobox.


 * (Dutch: Amsterdam, aannemer en arbeider) - the bolding is not suitable here.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Removed bold. I decided to add it because the shape was an A due to all three groups starting with that letter in Dutch.


 * EL should just be "Official website"  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Done.


 * Can we have some alt text?  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Added alt texts on all.
 * There is still no alt text for the lede image.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:21, 10 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Otherwise I am happy with this one.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 19:21, 10 October 2022 (UTC)

Review meta comments

 * I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:54, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
 * First round done. ~Styyx Talk ? 14:02, 10 October 2022 (UTC)