Talk:Weinen, Klagen, Sorgen, Zagen, BWV 12/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 16:44, 11 August 2014 (UTC)

Will review within the next three days :-)♦ Dr. Blofeld  16:44, 11 August 2014 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * pipe Schlosskirche in Weimar to Schloss Weimar.


 * It's intentionally to the redirect, because some day thatcould become an article.


 * Lead
 * A lot of italics. It is really necessary to italicize positions like Konzertmeister and Thomaskantor?


 * Copied from FA BWV 172, that's my model.


 * History
 * " The text of the opening chorus corresponds to John 16:20, the text of the first recitative is taken from Acts 14:22, "we must through much tribulation enter into the kingdom of God". =  "The text of the opening chorus corresponds to John 16:20, and the text of the first recitative, "we must through much tribulation enter into the kingdom of God", is taken from Acts 14:22."


 * taken

A lot of very short paragraphs and quite a lot of short, snappy sentences. Can you merge a few?
 * Music

This still reads as a bit rough around the edges in parts. Could use a copyedit for clarity and some tidying up in parts but in terms of content looks adequate for GA.♦ Dr. Blofeld  11:08, 13 August 2014 (UTC)


 * Will do, but make a few days. rather busy today and tomorrow, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:57, 13 August 2014 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:

Good job Gerda, looks fine for GA now!♦ Dr. Blofeld  14:51, 16 August 2014 (UTC)