Talk:Welcome to the Universe Tour/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:39, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

Comments
 * "$2Bill tour. It began on ..." you mean the WTTUT began, not the $2Bill tour began, but this is confusing.
 * Fixed.


 * "a green tour", consider linking green appropriately.
 * Linked to Environmentalism.


 * [Fair use of image checks out fine.]
 * "Thirty Seconds to Mars second studio" missing apostrophe.
 * Fixed.


 * "..and commenced ... and ended..." bit too much run-on for my liking in this sentence.
 * Fixed.


 * "A limited amount of tickets..." -> "limited number of tickets"
 * Fixed.


 * "that would minimized" no d required.
 * Fixed.


 * "tour as," not sure that should be a comma, perhaps a colon.
 * Fixed.


 * "positive review ... positive review" a little repetitive.
 * Fixed.


 * Representative set list isn't referenced.
 * Added a source.


 * [I added col scopes per MOS:DTT.]
 * Not convinced you really need that huge rowspan column for United States when all dates were in the United States.
 * I would leave it per convention.


 * I'm not familiar with several of the sources, what makes "rockdirt.com" a RS? "livewire"?
 * Those sources are commonly used on Wikipedia, see WP:NEWSBLOG.

Not bad at all, will place on hold for a week pending changes/responses to above. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:34, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your comments, The Rambling Man.--Earthh (talk) 22:27, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Okay, no problem. I linked the journal for the new reference you provided, but I'm satisfied with the article now.  Good work. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:10, 6 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you :) Earthh (talk) 13:08, 6 March 2014 (UTC)