Talk:Weltzheimer/Johnson House

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This is my first page -- if it doesn't live up to the highest standards of Wikipedia, that is why.

I know this article begs for an image. I didn't use one just because I couldn't a good one that I was certain could be used legally. At some point I'll visit the site and take some photos that, while artless, will be unquestionably legitimate.

Mild Rewrite
I gave this article a workover, varying sentence structure and correcting punctuation. I did notice, however, that several paragraphs — of rather mediocre English — are indentical to text on the Oberlin museum page linked at the end. Paraphrase is still plagiarism, so perhaps they should be thoroughly reworked. I have no idea what "and perennial borders extended selected wall out into the landscape" is supposed to mean, so I left it.--Janko (talk) 12:33, 15 November 2013 (UTC)