Talk:Wendy Ewald

Some of the places are in the West Bank
Gilabrand reverted my edit. Nothing in the source contradict that she also visited the West Bank. Giving the impression that the Old City of Jerusalem and Hebron is in Israel isn't neutral. An alternative solution could be removing "and also visited the West Bank" but inserting "in the West Bank" after mentioning both the Old City and Hebron. Either way, the older wording can't be there. --IRISZOOM (talk) 12:39, 30 January 2014 (UTC)