Talk:Weronika Rosati/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:10, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 22:10, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Here, and in #Acting_career, Inland Empire should link to Inland Empire (film).


 * Add a comma after "Last Vegas (2013)".


 * "Aside acting" "Aside from acting"

Early life and education

 * Remove the comma after "Warsaw Ochota Theatre".


 * "trained dancing" "trained in dancing"


 * "taka" "take"


 * Add a comma after "Larry Moss Studio".

Acting career

 * Add a comma after "panned by critics".


 * "Polish actors successful" "successful Polish actors"


 * The phrase "international scene" doesn't sound right, so try rewording.


 * "guest starred" "guest-starred"


 * "and the 1940s" "and 1940s"

Personal life and non-acting work

 * "to leg injury" "to a leg injury"


 * Remove the comma after "unable to walk".


 * "and a continual" "and continual"


 * "in relationship" "in a relationship"


 * "list of 100" "list of the 100"


 * "of Polish" "of the Polish"


 * "guest hosted" "guest-hosted"

Filmography

 * This section looks good.