Talk:West Harlem Environmental Action

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This article requires a lot of editing in order to reach the standards that Wikipedia strives for. The entire introduction lacked citations, as there was not one citation within the first 3 paragraphs. From a readers perspective, this means that the information is not credible as there are no sources to back up any of the claims made. This theme continues throughout the entire article, however references are introduced. Some of the references used, especially reference 15, are not necessarily reliable sources as they are primary sources, meaning the information they produce about themselves are likely biased, leaning in their favor. This is most notable in the "Mission" section of the article, highlighting this sections unimportance and redundancy. Lastly, through reading, it becomes apparent that a lot of the vocabulary is not academic, ambiguous and misleading. Claims like "one of the biggest accomplishments", and "continuing to improve" are blanket claims with little standing. There is a lack of detail prominent within the articles.

Amsawyer1998 (talk) 02:36, 12 February 2018 (UTC)

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