Talk:West Midlands CARE Team

I declare my interest as a member of this team, but have tried to write an article with as little bias as possible Jpj157 (talk) 14:15, 5 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Do you have any good sources for updating this pages contents? TheMouseMen (talk) 21:10, 10 April 2023 (UTC)

Ready for move to article space?
Do others think this article is ready for a move to the public article space? Thanks Jpj157 (talk) 14:39, 5 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Hi Jpj157, after reading the article, I don't think it fully meets Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy. If you want to improve that, there is a tutorial to help you do so. LegoKontribsTalkM 14:56, 5 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Have made a few edits to try and make things less sensational-sounding and more neutral. Any thoughts please? Jpj157 (talk) 15:25, 5 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Looks much better. To submit it for approval, you can add to the top of the page and it will be marked for review. LegoKontribsTalkM 15:42, 5 October 2012 (UTC)